The Official Writing Challenge
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08/09/09
Give us some paragraph breaks and this'll be a winner.

Great tone of voice with an absolutely killer humor content.

As a guy, I can empathize with the "figure" thing but I can't really feel ya. I have a body with the overall shape of a Crispy Creme doughnut but there are many days when I consider myself borderline Tom Selleck.

Notwithstanding, you did a great job describing the trials and tribulations in parenthood and I hope that you never stop writing and honing your skills.

I'm telling ya.

YOU'RE GOOD.

Pauly
This one made me smile. Love the feel of it. Paragraphs would have made it easier to read, but great work.
08/13/09
Cute, funny.. full of pep and ENERGY!
Congratulations on receiving highly commended status with this entry.
Lisa