The Official Writing Challenge
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07/30/09
I love baseball stories for some reason. Maybe because I spent so many years in the bleachers watching my sons play. Love this story, too. Very good job!
Lovely story. Being South African i do not know much about baseball, yet i could identify with the mc's emotions and feelings. Well done:)
08/01/09
Very cool writing! I really could feel the emotions.
08/01/09
Loved this surprise ending. Good job!
08/01/09
In the beginning when I read the kid's name was "Ted" - I immediately perked up, figuring the story was going to be about my Hero, Ted Williams! But it wasn't, and I was disappointed. But it STILL was a neat baseball story - and thought it extremely well written and touching. Thanks for sharing
Oooh, sounds promising for Ted. Hope it turns out just right for him, you have just the right amount of hope woven in at the end of this. Excellently done!