The Official Writing Challenge
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05/21/09
Wonderful title, and a poem that many abused women might find hopeful.

Check your spelling--dispair/despair, and weeped/wept stood out for me.

I really liked your first few stanzas, and would have liked to read more about this woman, to get to know her life better.
05/25/09
Well done. Touching.