The Official Writing Challenge
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What a great story and well told. Good job.
04/10/09
Great story!

I wonder if it'd be tighter if, instead of the story-within-a story, it was just told as a straightforward story.

Love the title, and the theme of redemption.
You did a good job with this, illustrating God's great mercy and grace. An inspiring read!
I love happy endings! Good writing too. Thank you.
04/13/09
I loved the story because it's a reminder of God's power in our lives. Thanks
04/13/09
Loved your story! Thanks for sharing. Had to find out what happened to every one in the story. :) God is indeed a God of redemption.