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07/11/05
What a fabulous twist! Excellent story-telling. Thank God for dedicated physicians & their 'ministry-minded' families. It is a calling.
I'm impressed. I thought he was a creep. I had to read it again to see if I could have caught it earlier on. Nice Job....
07/14/05
Breathtaking story! Our God is the GOD OF LOVE! True Love!!
07/15/05
That was so great! How emotional! I tell you I was mad as fire with Lindsey for putting up with that junk, like her mother--and then I felt so silly for being so mad at the end. You tricked me good!
Great, great story!!!!
God bless ya, littlelight
07/15/05
You achieved your goal - I wanted to punch him! and give her some advice lol but with a good twist at the end.
Very clever approach. I couldn't understand how any woman could be so forgiving....and then, bang, you cinched the story with the punch line. "Her husband, Dr. Andrew Waverly, had helped, along with her father, deliver many high risk pregnancy babies over the last twenty-five years." Good job. Very compelling!