The Official Writing Challenge
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08/29/08
Interesting mix of prose and poetry...with a nice lesson attached.
08/29/08
WOW! This was different! Love the new card game.
08/31/08
Very nice, with a good message. I like the way you've changed some of the card meanings from the original folk tale, and written it is the form of a poem. Very original turn :)
09/01/08
Oh, I really liked this. I've heard of different Biblical lessons attached to the numbers in cards, but I've never seen it in poem form. Good job!
Wow. I thought this was going in one direction, and then you shifted directions and tied everything up nicely at the end. This was very interesting. I will never look at a deck of cards in the same way. I want to share this with my family, because we all like card games, and this would be a fun way to think about God and the Bible while playing.

Thank you for this unique take on this week's topic!
I like your poem. I'd never considered biblical applications for cards before.
09/09/08
I like the way you interchanged between a narrative and poetry. The cards and their spiritual significance is great too.