The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting; this almost reads like a parable in its narrative style.

I enjoyed this very much.
I am confused by the ending. Maybe it's just me. Is the end still referring to her as the baby or the members that didn't show? Because it's not the length of time that you walk with Him but the quanity of time spent in His presence. Overall nice telling of the story. Good job.
Very well done! I really enjoyed the story line and the way it was written. I am excited to read more of your work, now that I have found you. Love in Christ, Betty
You have a lot of wisdom to share with the world. i work with your daughter and all i wanted to do was to encourage you- after reading this short story- to keep writing!!!

a fellow writer-of-faith