The Official Writing Challenge
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I'm definitely wondering about that woman too. Good descriptions of what was going on. Enjoyed this read - keep writing.
Uplifting and encouraging! Thanks for sharing what I hope is a true story.
Maybe this woman was an angel that you took care of? Just a thought:) Thank you for reminding us how important it is to reach out to the physical needs of others during this holiday season.
I loved your last line the most:) Good story as well as reminder. The only suggestion I might offer is to work in the dialogue tags a bit more smoothly - otherwise it flowed well.