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I can't believe no one has commented on this story yet.

I really enjoyed this. Your emotions were conveyed amazingly in your writing. Good job.
This is one of my favorites! The twist at the end just made this charming story more endearing. Your writing is really descriptive and smooth. Good job!
Such a different story and so well written.
This was absolutely charming! Having spent a good five visits to labor and delivery myself I loved hearing a little of what happens on the other side.

You have such a wonderful way of bringing us into the moment.
Thank you so much, Laurie, for reading and commenting on my story. Bless you, Martha Ford
How easily we jump to conclusions. Great story.
Congratulations, Martha. In addition to your highly commended in intermediate, your entry has placed 35th overall. The Lists for the Top 15 in each Level and the Top 40 overall are available in the Weekly Results and Highest Rankings forum of our Faithwriters Message Boards.