The Official Writing Challenge
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05/09/05
Oh wow. This dialogue is so real and so painful. Your story is a beautiful example of "love never fails" and the ending is perfect!
05/10/05
I love your story. Wow! "The Day Grace was born."
A beautiful picture of God's Grace.

Kathy
05/10/05
I love the description here, especially the "verbal bullets"! It is a great reminder to be careful of how we use our most powerful weapon, our mouths! As moms and parents, we have great potential to bless our children, as these parents did when they embraced their daughter and granddaughter, Grace! Good job! Good message! Blessings, Cheri
05/20/05
Wow. I was caught up in the action, the emotions, the pain of the father ... it's a great piece of writing, Debbie. I'm so relieved to see the happy ending too!