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Topic: Write in the POETRY genre (05/17/07)
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TITLE: We Are Not Our Own | Previous Challenge Entry
By Mary Foster
05/21/07 -
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Where to start
Life falls apart
Whatever we do
Must be for You
Time wasted
Life tasted
Briefly we live
How much do we give
Fall into sin
We can live again
But we must thirst
You must come first
To do your will
With trust and skill
Faith will win
Victory over sin
The harvest is rich
Just Trust is my pitch
With God in control
Through life we stroll
Neither turning
Spirits burning
He’s our desire
Love will transpire
Reaching all
This our call
Harmless as a dove
To show His love
Harm no one
Tell of His Son
Bring truth to light
Destroy the blight
Evil’s stench
Its harmful wrench
Is unable
To ruin God’s table
His feast for Faithful
All are grateful
His blessing abundant
His harvest verdant
A light has appeared
To God it steered
Our focus shifted
Praises lifted
Spirits energized
Potential recognized
To be fruitful
Makes life beautiful
God’s grace, glorious
God’s mercy, marvelous
God’s work, wondrous
Life in Him, fabulous
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Which is okay but work on the consistency a bit more to make the reader remember your title at the end.
I agree that it helps to underline the theme especially at the end.