The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/05
Light the fire!!!! Thanks for sharing your thoughts!
Very nice! That's my desire too.
01/26/05
I enjoyed this poem immensely. Thank you.
01/28/05
Beautiful. Just one thing that would make it better, in my pedantic opinion, and that is to remove the apostrophe in 'other's' ... am I right in thinking it is just a plural, not a possessive or contraction? But really, it is beautiful.
Beautiful prayer. God bless you.
This is a truly lovely poem, one which we can all learn from and be challenged by. May God guide and bless you as you honor Him with your writing. Very well done.