The Official Writing Challenge
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Caught my attention with the title and kept it through the writing. Good job. May God bless and keep writing. Oh, and Quack, Quack.
Excellent! Especially liked the ending.
Good story. And a great lesson.
Loved the title and the flow of your story. Nice job.
Very sweet story--great title--and it made me miss my little girls (all grown up now).
I enjoyed this mother/daughter story although mine was out of luck for a sewing lesson. She learned anyway and could have given me lessons! The message here was illustrated so well. The humor was great.
This is so sweetly told. Heartwarming - a little treasure with a big message! Blessings, Jo
Very nice slife of life story.
My favorite lines: "Fifteen minutes later Karen was working on not gnashing her teeth. Ok, Lord, I need help here, but not like I thought I would! Shes doing great but Ive got a bad case of Daffy Duck Syndrome. "
I chuckled at this. Well done.
DDS, huh? I like it! I could visualize everything so well. Great job!
Great job. Very real story. Thanks
DDS--love it and true. How many times i've been frustrated because if I ignored their pleas I could get so much more done off my own agenda. Thanks for the needed lesson. Well done!