The Official Writing Challenge
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A sweet story with an important message. I sometimes get caught up in cleaning and forget what is important. Nice job.
02/10/07
Good story. I really like your descriptions at the beginning - so easy to hear the woodpecker, feel the pillow. Good reminders of what's important.
I liked this. So VERY real to me. I appreciate how you fleshed it out with lots of details but not so many it overtook things. It's one of the only ones that's drawn me in from the start. Good job.
Good point here. Sometimes we need to let go. We also need to give others space to learn how to help us. You captured it well.
02/15/07
Now that's what I call a wonderful and smart Mother-In-Law! Such a great story, and one that came to such a delightful ending. Great thoughts here! Enjoyed the read.
***Congrats!*** A well-deserved win, great message+story=a lot of heart! ^_^