The Official Writing Challenge
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04/12/05
I don't know where to begin. This took my breath away. Filled with beauty and horror, combined with great love. How gifted you are! Give us more poems with such splendor!
Bravo! This was a most powerful piece. It tore at my heart strings and I visualized the sacrificial Lamb of God. From beginning to end, nothing but genius.

My favorite: "Within the ready clay, sealed with grace, bearing mercy's imprint. Friendship, first revealed" Wonderful, wonderful! This gets my vote!
04/12/05
Fantastic! Our Sovereign friend holding fast our hands of clay. You've reminded us how much we have to be thankful for. What an awesome sacrifice He made so that we could know Him as Friend.
04/15/05
All hail the power of Jesus name! Your storyboard of words, expressing the enormous sacrifice the Lord did make, leaves this piece of redeemed clay, speechless.
04/20/05
Wow! How did I miss this one? This is awesome.
04/23/05
This one is incredible. Please don't just leave it here at FW but send it out to many.