The Official Writing Challenge
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08/24/06
Great entry and a really good read. I enjoyed this very much!
08/26/06
I love a good ending and this piece delivered one. Excellent twist. Leaves a definite impression on the reader about the freedom of Christ's gift. Nice dialogue too, great flow. Well done!
08/27/06
This was a very thought provoking story with a terrific ending. Kept my interest all the way! Great job!
08/28/06
Lots of delightful stuff here--my only question is why Ralph collects crosses if they have no significance for him. Great dialog, wonderful setting.
Very good dialogue. I enjoyed the read. Good writing.
08/29/06
Loved the ending!! Wonderful story with great, vivid detail. Thanks!
08/31/06
Congratulations Rachel! This is excellent writing. There are no wasted words here. Every word gives so much depth and interest to the story and WOW! what a great thought-provoking ending! I'll see ya in advanced!!! Great job!