The Official Writing Challenge
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Great entry and a really good read. I enjoyed this very much!
I love a good ending and this piece delivered one. Excellent twist. Leaves a definite impression on the reader about the freedom of Christ's gift. Nice dialogue too, great flow. Well done!
This was a very thought provoking story with a terrific ending. Kept my interest all the way! Great job!
Lots of delightful stuff here--my only question is why Ralph collects crosses if they have no significance for him. Great dialog, wonderful setting.
Very good dialogue. I enjoyed the read. Good writing.
Loved the ending!! Wonderful story with great, vivid detail. Thanks!
Congratulations Rachel! This is excellent writing. There are no wasted words here. Every word gives so much depth and interest to the story and WOW! what a great thought-provoking ending! I'll see ya in advanced!!! Great job!