The Official Writing Challenge
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This story made me hungry. Hungry for the hospitality shown in this lovely piece and hungry for the food items that were described in rich detail. My favorite phrase: "Pastries filled with all sorts of homemade jams ranging from apple to raspberry oozing out of the frosted glazed dough." Yum! Great job with this piece.
02/14/05
Great message and lesson. We can make a difference. My only suggestion would be to break up some of the longer paragraphs to make it easier to read. Best wishes with this story.
As a traveling nanny, I am often in strange cities and churches. The ones that touch me quickly are the ones that have a coffee table as it encourages you to stop and gives others a chance to say hello. This brought back some memories!
really nice write
02/15/05
I enjoyed reading this just as those in the church enjoyed the coffee and lovely pastries. Just shows you what a little thought can do. Nice story.
02/16/05
what fun! Loved to have been there.
02/20/05
It's amazing what can happen when two or three are gathered in His name and in ministry. Thanks for sharing.