The Official Writing Challenge
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01/29/15
Excellent!

God bless~
This is a good start. Finding the words to rhyme might be the hardest part.

One set has only 4 lines and another has 6 lines. Some readers may really feel uneasy about this.

Keep writing,though, in the style you are comfortable with.
02/05/15
Caleb, good job! Reminds me of someone saying, we won't be taking our material wealth in a u-haul behind the hearse. Blessings,