The Official Writing Challenge
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Shane, you had nothing to worry about after all. Huge congratulations for this. You have a real talent for description, evoking both a sense of place, smell and feeling. Space your paragraphs for easier reading; but keep going! I am thrilled for you. God bless.
Congratulations on a much-deserved win this week. Wonderfully composed and flowing piece. Kudos!
11/21/05
Congratulations Shane. If I had read “Beauty in the Ashes,” I would have picked this it too. It looked lots of words, but the content is Great. I just Love your story. Sometimes eyes can miss what is so Beautiful. “Today, I see the picture I took of that flower and I am constantly reminded of the Savior’s love. Romans 5:8 in the NASB translation says, “But God demonstrates His own love toward us, in that while we were yet sinners, Christ died for us.” He was a beautiful bloom in the midst of ugliness and destruction.” Thank you. Helen
11/21/05
sorry, I am writing to fast.

If I had read “Beauty in the Ashes,” I would have picked this one too. It looked like a lots of words,
11/21/05
Wonderfully descriptive piece. Congratulations on your placement and a job well done.
11/21/05
Congratulations Shane, you have described this place so well I can see and smell it! You set it up so that the lesson becomes more powerful. Thanks. Yeggy