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10/24/05
Good dialogue and I could hear myself in the woman! My honey-do list is huge!! Nice story:)
10/25/05
If only it could always be like it was at the end:) God convicted me a year ago about "trying to wear the pants" in the family instead of letting my husband do what God had called him to do- lead the household. Thanks for reminding me how far God has brought me!
10/26/05
Very well done! It makes those verses you quoted so much more personal when the reader sees them in a context they can relate to.
10/27/05
the drip.. drip.. drip.. totally had my attention. loved it.
10/27/05
Very entertaining! I particularly like your choice for the husband's name.
I enjoyed your sense of humor in this and you portrayed the couple nicely. Sometimes it is hard to not to be a nagging wife. Thanks for the gentle reminder.
10/27/05
I like the sweetness of the relationship between the husband and wife.
10/27/05
Great job showing how Scripture can be used wrongly as a "weapon" when our hearts are not right with God. This could have worked equally well as a somewhat unresolved comedy, but your ending was sweet.
10/27/05
Cassie - this was a great read. Entertaining, but with an important lesson. Well done!
Yay I love happy endings, great ideas here and entertaining.
10/28/05
I enjoyed this piece. It was a story I think many people can relate to. I like how you added the "drips" between paragraphs. Well done.
Who couldn't relate to this well-told story! The use of Scripture was extremely effective. You managed to pack quite a lot into 750 words. Well done.
10/28/05
Oh! Something every couple -and singles planning on getting married -should read!
10/28/05
This is really special-glad I had the opportunity to read. I was looking forward to the happier ending! God bless ya, littlelight
I loved the play on the 'drip' theme! Good story telling!
Very well written. I liked it. Before the character even mentioned the scripture about the wife being like a constant dripping, that's what I thought of. Very enjoyable!
Very clever!