The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/05
This reads as a highly intimate prayer time with the Lord. The repitition is effective.
10/27/05
What a wonderful prayer! These words would also make nice lyrics for a song. Thanks for sharing your prayer with me:)
10/28/05
I thought of a song too! Nice writing.
10/30/05
A lyrical prayer - nice, fun, clean written.