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This is a great story with a message that is clear, but not at all preachy. I have felt in the past that there are people on prayer chains just to hear the gossip. I guess some of it is human nature, but your story is a needed reminder.
A very vivid portrayal of poor Miriam : ) Reminds me of that line from Burns: If we could see ourselves as others see us.
08/02/10
This is funny except it is too too true! You put the point across well of how blind we can be to our true motives.
08/02/10
Great story! Funny, but it gets the point across. I love how you tell us without telling us. I think it makes it much more memorable.
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