The Official Writing Challenge
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07/30/09
Aww! If I had dimples, they be showing now! This would be a lovely book with watercolor illustrations. I'm sharing your article with a friend whose childhood nick name was Dimples. This was fanciful and delightful. Thanks for writing it.
07/30/09
Amazing and so creative. This is simply lovely!
07/30/09
While waiting for the winners to be announced, I decided I would go to the beginners and pick one out purely on the title and I chose yours. I'm glad I did. It's a very cute idea. The writing needs a bit of work but you have a great storyline. I like your descriptions and I especially like where the dimples landed. Just too cute.
07/31/09
Absolutely delightful! This kept the reader thoroughly interested throughout. In the 8th paragraph, the first sentence of the paragraph is quite awkward, in my opinion. Might I suggest: "Early in the dawn, the robins sat on the cheery boughs..." Just a thought. Thank you for sharing this adorable story. Laura
08/01/09
What a great idea you had! This story was so much fun to read. I too think it would make a sweet children's book.
08/06/09
Beautiful!