The Official Writing Challenge
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06/07/05
What an appropriate analogy, right after the latest Star Wars movie was released! LOL. (A good analogy too, by the way). You made some excellent observations here. How awesome that Jesus endured hell so we don't have to.
Well done.
Blessings, Lynda
06/09/05
Interesting and "out of the box." Thank you.
06/09/05
Very nice writing. I liked. :0)
06/10/05
Very good. I'm sure many Christians have wondered the wisdom in using Good Friday to describe that day. The comparsion to the scene in SW is a very good way to catch younger readers'(or us "older" scifi fans') attention.
I love it when a title and the first sentence grab me. I often think of writing as hearing a voice and I like your voice. Nice job. I would have used Anakins name and Lucifer. It shows they both now have different names because they too both wanted more power.