The Official Writing Challenge
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The Lord never breaks us without a greater purpose, that sometimes He alone knows. I was given this recently, "Remember in the dark what He said to you in the light."
What a sad cry for help. I felt the pain and discouragement.
05/25/07
Your poem gives voice to the feelings of despair a person can feel in life's dark moments.
05/27/07
Very feeling, I felt the anguish in this poem. Very well written!
05/28/07
the sadness and despair here are well-described. You've done a good job of painting a sad situation.
05/29/07
Wonderful thoughts. Good job.