The Official Writing Challenge
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05/04/07
Loved the opening sentence. It drew me into the piece.
Very inspirational writing. I really liked reading this, keep writing.
Inspired me. Thanks!
05/07/07
Thank you for this testimony!

A few things you might want to change: "eagle" should not be capitalized, and the very short paragraphs gave this a choppy read. Think about maybe combining some of them to make your piece flow.

It's a great story of God's overcoming grace!
05/10/07
I loved your analogy yet I also think it is a little choppy. Maybe polish it up a bit to help the flow, but otherwise a great job!