The Official Writing Challenge
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What a beautiful picture of God's love and care for us in every detail... thanks so much for sharing.
I enjoyed the descriptive use of words. Thanks for sharing your heart.
03/07/07
Beautiful description and detail. I'd break up that middle paragraph just for readability - it is quite long. I could feel your main character's anticipation. Great job!
03/08/07
What a lovely sentiment of how deep His love is for us. Nicely done!
I enjoyed the description in your story. I was hoping she would find the perfect dress. I like the end where you show God's love.
Oh, what beautiful "fairy tale"! Great, great first entry! Lovely writing and wonderful story - a careful proofreading would clear up a few minor typos, and make this shine. :)
03/08/07
Wow! What a wonderful story of God's love and perfect timing. What a wonderful dress that would have been. Thanks for sharing the story