The Official Writing Challenge
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02/05/07
Ah, how lovely and thank God for all the Mrs. Elliotts. There are some spacing problems here but overall it is a touching and nicely written story.
Wonderful story, very well written. Just a couple things, though. It would be easier to read in this setting by putting a space between the paragraph's. The other is to check your use of quotation marks. I noticed a couple of times were there shoud have been some and there weren't.
Other than grammatical errors, it was great.
Pretty good. I liked the character of Sam and the title. It fits.