The Official Writing Challenge
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01/20/07
A modern-day psalm--the prayer of many writers.

I thought the first half was stronger and more original than the second half...would love to read more. That part was intensely personal.
01/22/07
Beautiful - I love your use of familiar "Christian phrases" to communicate your and God's heart.
01/25/07
I agree, the first part especially was amazing and almost as if you peeked at my journals over the years. You captured the heart of the called writer.
Great poetry on yeilding to God's will in our lives.