The Official Writing Challenge
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07/17/06
Very moody and thought-provoking.
'Lies' the very thing that separates us most from the creator. You put it so well by addressing self 'could it be mine that brought the tears to your eyes this time?' Well done.
07/17/06
LOVE your second stanza! Great message too.