The Official Writing Challenge
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06/11/06
Thank you for sharing! :) I think you have a wonderful tought to convey. Something seems to be missing and it might just be in the scripture you used to conclude it. But I enjoyed the piece. Thanks! :)
06/12/06
Nicely written, but I agree that the ending seems light. Perhaps a simple line such as "I remember, because I AM" would have brought it into clarity. Nice style and good command of language. :)
06/14/06
I loved it! So nicely written, and such a wonderful chat with the Almighty! I remembered along with you...great job!