The Official Writing Challenge
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This was great. If it were broken up into paragraphs I'd say it could be a winner.
05/20/06
You give your reader a creative insight to this familiar, though barely known, character. It is interesting reading. You are on your way! God bless your work.
05/22/06
Good story, well told. I liked the contrasts you showed between his earthly home and his heavenly one. Paragraphs, please! Otherwise, great.
05/23/06
This would make a great oral reading!