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By Stephanie Ehlers
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It's easy to see that you are headed in the right direction. You planned out what you wanted to say and you articulated it well. That's an excellent place to work from. I don't have any specific corrections to make so I do apologize if this sounds vague, but I think the next step for you is to work on your "writer's voice". Just keep honing (and entering the Challenge) and you'll do very well around here!