The Official Writing Challenge
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interesting little story! I think sometimes when God really wants to speak to our hearts, we hear sermons all around us. It is as if He knows that we learn best in life stories rather than a direct reprimand.
02/24/05
What a wonderful story. When we give our lights shine before men in such a way that they glorify our Father in heaven. A wonderful opening to share the gospel.
02/25/05
Very nicely done.
02/27/05
I love it except for one tiny little detail. It may have been a typo, but you wrote that "God cannot semd manna from Heaven". My God can. My God created the Heavens and the earth. God can do anything that pleases Him. *not trying to be rude in the slightest.
02/27/05
This was a very amusing paprable that really said a lot. I enjoyed reading it. However, toward the end there were some grammar errors. For example you siad Tai was "delightful" instead of delighted and that she had been after you for it - refering back to shoes which should have been "them". This did not stop my appreciation for the story and how imaginative it was.