The Official Writing Challenge
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03/06/06
Cute story and interesting take on the topic. I was thinking a bull maybe, but the billy goat worked. Nicely done.
03/07/06
This was a different style! At first I was unsure about it as the beginning paragraph was abit long and then as I read more, I found I was intrigued.
03/10/06
Oh, this is another great story to read to the grandchildren! What a wonderful way to convey an important message. Looking forward to more from you!
03/10/06
This was solid. The only thing to watch is the > effect- too much too early. I know you have to build back-story, and in this case, you had to, and it worked pretty well. Just keep it piffy (lol short), and give hooks to keep me wanting to move to the next paragraph.

Well done!

~Zac
03/11/06
cute...we can all relate to our childishness at times