The Official Writing Challenge
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02/07/06
This is a beautiful picture of love for one's mother. A few minute changes: beside in place of besides, and was instead of were in the second paragraph. Very touching and hopeful--nicely done.
02/08/06
Very touching story, you seemed to have captured the grief, loss, and family drawing close to comfort one another very well. Thank you for sharing. God bless, littlelight