The Official Writing Challenge
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Many people struggle with the inner turmoil you write about. A yearning for love, hope, healing and contentment. Thanks for sharing.
01/24/06
I really liked this. I was a cross between free verse and rhymed poetry, but it worked for me. You chose your words well, and you have some lovely imagery.
02/10/06
Is this the Ashly working with Kelly here in Indy?? (If so, I'm the triplet mom you met...)

Hopefully I've got the right person...

Anyway, wanted to make sure you knew that you placed #9 out of 70 entries!! (didn't know if you knew about the Message Board where they post that)
That's awesome!!

This was a wonderful poem too, I'm very impressed by your writing, depth, and ability to express so much with so few words.

Way to go, keep up the good work!
02/11/06
I love it! I can sense the desire to start again. Keep writing!
02/11/06
A beautiful poem to read, Ashly. Some very visual images. Loved the determination. My fav line. 'and dare to dream the love of my life/feels the same.' Lookinf forward to future entries, Yeggy
02/11/06
Wow Ashley! This is really good! I enjoyed the flow and I enjoyed the words you chose. Keep on entering!