The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked the use of your analogy of the cows in your writing. If you wanted to put in a Bible verse that would go along with these words,"Savior, confess, repent, forsake their sins and gratefully believe that they have been forgiven, they will be saved" You could have used the well known verse of (Acts 2:38)

Good writing. Keep it up.
God puts a mark on His children and His flock knows Him. Well done.
01/25/17
My husband & I own a cattle farm so I was very interested in your story & lived the way you weaved into a salvation message. Well done- look forward to reading more from you.
01/26/17
Congratulations, Robert, on your 3rd place finish in the Beginners category.

I found the history of cow branding very interesting and like the way you tied it in to God's branding of his children.

Please double space between paragraphs for easier reading.
01/27/17
I enjoyed your short history of cow branding. This is a well written piece.

Congratulations on 3rd place. Keep writing.

Blessings - Trudy
02/02/17
Congrats on being placed third. I enjoyed reading this story and its application to salvation.
Great Job!
I like your story and how it related to God putting a mark on those who are his. The only thing is... Not sure how the comment of him becoming a famous millionaire, has any relation to the theme of the story. Good job and congrats!