The Official Writing Challenge
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Concerning your topic, I came to one conclusion recently (even I am proved differently later on.)

When Jesus was being crucified one of the remarks recorded that he said was "Father, forgive them for the know not what they do." I feel/think that Jesus was able to suffer his pain easier because in this statement he also forgave them. When we forgive others, the pain they inflicted is easier to be endure.

Stayed in tune with God's will for us to live by.
01/16/16
I enjoyed this, even though it was primarily sad. My red ink as such would be that early on you seem to indicate that the man's main fault is that he is an alcoholic. However, the remainder of the story focuses on infidelity.
01/16/16
A multi-layered piece with depth and precision of emotions highly focused throughout.

Well done.

God bless~
01/17/16
This is a very Good story. Much truth. The message came across very clear. Well written.