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By Shiny Lijo
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"Enough!!! " 11 year Sally ran away from one corner of the room to another.She hid behind the door and wiped her tears.Slowly picked her bag and ran to school even though she didn't like it.
"Guess what! Andrew is giving a birthday party...aren't you happy?"mini was perplexed seeing Sally's face."..am happy!".
She ran home and stood in front of the mirror to see what fits her."will black be nice?pink would be better! Do I have belt?or should I wear one?" Lot of questions ran through her mind and there...finally decided on pink. She picked a small greeting card along with her and wrote some stolen words."Happy birthday my friend! My mom said you are inscribed on the palm of God.And you are very special and no other Andrew is born!"....she giggled and closed the card and kept safe in her blue bag.
She walked through the pathway and saw a bright Bangalow.with all excitement she opened the door and walked towards Andrew holding her precious blue bag.slowly she picked the card and stretched her hands "Happy birthday Andrew"
"Ah...pink suits you! Miss.Piggy bank"....hahaha.....all the brightness around her faded away slowly. She bursted into tears and ran away and took shelter behind a door.
"I don't know whether you exist God.Why am I so fat? Why do people call me PIG? Mom said I am plumpy because of those little medicines I eat...why me? I don't eat much but still my friends say 'reduce your weight.You look like an elephant,' I don't want to be like this".....
Suddenly she felt someone touched her and whispered "Remember your mommy said....'You are inscribed on my palm and you are special to me.And no other Sally is born like you!"
Those words pierced through her heart and bought a smile to her face. From then onwards, doors are for way not hiding!
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Two things to help. One - put a space between paragraphs to make it easier to read. Then in the first sentence spell out eleven-year old ....
Keep writing!
Will see to it next time about 11 year old;).