The Official Writing Challenge
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Unique perspective on spring. Uplifting yet somber. Meter felt a little uneven in the opening stanza.
I had a hard time floowing this; some of the things that you said spring is not, are things I've always thought spring is.

Nevertheless, you have a gift with words; this poem is very lyrical.
Fascinating rhythm and choice of adjectives. Interesting contrasts between physical manifestations of Spring vs. spiritual.
"Winter's Edge"??...I wondered about this title, and tried to digest the thoughts; however, much of this free verse is over my head; I tend to be rather simplistic (A/K/A "simple-minded"..ahem) in my thinking; thus, something beautiful to others, can easily pass me by. Only one small opinion here, keep up the good work and God Bless.