The Official Writing Challenge
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11/29/14
Beautiful story that was delivered with precision and a powerful close.

God bless~
11/29/14
Great story! Thanks for sharing. One suggestion is when the word mom appears with the name Carol, I'm fairly certain the word mom is to be capitalized. Also the word mom should be capitalized in the beginning of the 4th paragraph. Great ending!