The Official Writing Challenge
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11/30/05
Very unique thoughts. Good clear message. I did get a little confused from the quick jump without a transition, from the first paragragh, to the nest. But it smoothed out in the end. God bless ya, littlelight
11/30/05
The quick transition threw me, but I recovered. Good message. Thanks.
12/06/05
Shane, there is nothing truer than what you have written here.
Something to meditate on.
Yet, foolishly, often many of us will fall into the trap of trusting others too much...
An evil trap.
It was well written, a little on the ironic side with some of the analogies, but that's all part of it's charm!