The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the message in your story ...how true. Perhaps re check the grammar before submitting as there seems to be a word missing here and there linking other words. Very good message..I really liked it. Thank you. God Bless.
Be encouraged, you drew a beautiful moment, and message onto the page. There are some details you need to attend to and perhaps break the bigger blocks of writing into smaller paragraphs, but you managed to get together a delightful piece in time for submission. Good for you!

11/29/05
What a vital message wrapped in a delightful piece. I would suggest putting an extra space in between paragraphs for ease of readability. Great job!
11/30/05
I really enjoyed reading your story. Good message involved. Try double spacing between paragraphs and a little editing and it will be good to go. God bless ya, littlelight
12/02/05
This was written from your heart, and has a great message. God Bless you. Keep writing.