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This is a nice little sermon with a good message.

You had quite a few words left that you could have expanded some of your examples.

I liked the message that we are God's great expectations I've had self-esteem issues and it's nice to be reminded that God expects and I am capable of wonderful things.
09/02/11
This is a nice devotional and I liked how you led into the ultimate story of expectations - those of Christ and then, of course, ours as a result.

Who was the neurosurgeon you referenced? Maybe I missed it, but your other examples included specific names and that little story left me puzzled a little bit because I wanted to know who it was!

One thing I like to do - but it isn't strictly necessary - is to put emphasis on my verses by italicizing them, particularly when they are the first line of my devotional. It might be something you want to consider in the future.

Great job - I look forward to reading more of your work!
09/03/11
Beautiful job, nicely done. This is a lovely devotional...Nice message. God bless~
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