The Official Writing Challenge
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10/11/05
This is a beautiful poem in four line stanzas that maintain their rhythm throughout. I like too how you compare yourself to the rose as you wait for God's work to unfold.
10/12/05
Beautiful! I like poetic verse. Your idea is well expressed.
10/12/05
Consistent in both rhyme and meter: bravo!
Very disciplined use of rhyme and meter and I like the comparisons too. God bless.
Ok chicken, time to stop clucking!!! With a poem this good, you have nooo reason to be afraid. :) From now on, we're gonna expect you to HINT, HINT, HINT!!! Good job! :)
Ditto to all of the above. This was so good. Well done.
10/13/05
How true! God opens us one petal at a time. To blossom as we should. Good job! Great meter.
10/14/05
Very good and enjoyable to read. Great thoughts for us to ponder.
10/15/05
Enjoyed this well written poem. You make your point clearly without forced rhymes.
10/15/05
Beautiful. Well done.
Just beautiful, Laurie! Lovely and inspiring! I always enjoy reading your poetry.