The Official Writing Challenge
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01/31/05
informative..Thank you for sharing
Yeshua Bless

02/01/05
We never fully see the exstent of satan's schemes Thank You for revealing one more way to pray and one more way God can restore ! GODSPEED
Very strong opening. I feel that having to limit yourself to 750 words may have caused you to have to skimp on the ending, making the piece a bit less powerful than it might be. Sometimes I get tired at the end, and that happens to me.

But a great job; awewome description.

God bless,
This is a piece a lot of abused women need to read. Get it out there. God bless you.