The Official Writing Challenge
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07/29/10
Wow! This message is so important to women of all ages- Love the way you brought in God's point of view through Papa but left it at the end where she still wasn't convinced. Sometimes, it takes a lot to believe we are beautiful in His eyes.
07/31/10
I really liked this piece. I think you did an excellent job in capturing the emotion. Well done
Wow this was a powerful story indeed. It's so sad that so many women feel they aren't beautiful unless they look model-perfect. One thing is certain your writing is beautiful and it touched my heart.
08/04/10
This points out a sad truth about how some people see themselves, but also God's great truth of how He sees us. Good job.
Great message. Well done.
Congratulations Ivy on your EC....This is powerful!
what an awesome story! I was picturing a goth look.

Makes me wonder where the MC got the impression that she is ugly. Daddy is too late in telling her now.
08/05/10
Wow! Powerful story with great insight. I like how you captured the grit and raw pain of your mc. Congrats on your story's recognition.