The Official Writing Challenge
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You've made a good point here! It's all about money...blood money. You're so right also that we all have to answer someday for our actions or lack thereof.

Nicely written. Blessings!
A good message.
What an interesting thought--that red is the color of money! Very creative.

There's a poetry thread currently running in the Message Boards which explores one kind of poetry each week. We'd love to have your input! Look for it under the title "Jan's Master Class".
thank you good subject and powerful message. some of the fourth lines seemed a little forced as though you had tried to fit them in to the rhyming structures. This poem could work as free verse so you dont have to think of rhymes!