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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Spring (the season) (07/23/09)
The signs of spring is when the warmer temperatures arrive outside. The flowers begin to bloom. The snow is all gone. There are people watering their gardens.

The birds start chirping at six in the morning. The robins are outside looking for worms. The flies are out, and roaming about. The days are longer. Children are playing outside. People are barbequing in their backyards. The grass is getting greener.

When spring arrives, a lot of children are signed up for organized sports such as soccer, baseball or teeball. The golfers are filling up in the course, and playing 9 to 18 holes.

The trees are growing new leaves. The birds are building nests, and laying eggs. The grass is getting greener. A lot of couples are preparing for weddings in the summer. University students are finishing school, and studying for tests.

Boaters are sailing on the waters or fishing. Some people are canoeing . Others are swimming on a very warm spring day. The children are playing in the park with their caregivers. The swimming pools are starting to open.

That’s the sign of spring.
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Laura Manley
07/30/09
You have captured what we all experience in spring. It is undoubtedly my favorite season. Something that saddened me, and it has nothing to do with your writing, but it is so true and that is that the "caregivers" have the children at the park. Unfortunately, that is more true than not. Laura
Deana Thomas
07/30/09
I feel like I've gone back up North after a long warm winter spent here in sunny South Florida, where it is Spring all year long! Your descriptions are beautiful. You've set me to reminiscence! Write me a story telling about the people in this gorgeous setting!
Laury Hubrich 
08/04/09
This is well-written entry. Very springy:)
diana kay
08/04/09
thank you for this lovely descrition of Spring.! In your first sentence you use plural noun "Signs" and then the singular "is" I think it should be the first signs of spring are........ particularly as you then go on to desribe the different signs. Just a little point well done!
Bryan Rudolph
08/05/09
Each of your signs serves, as does an artist's stroke to canvass. Enough strokes and a rendering is realized. Enough signs and spring has sprung. Thank you for your spring rendering. Bryan. 04Aug09Tue.